Last wednesday I got feedback on my don't panic posters. I did 2 very different ones and was torn between them.
On the feedback sheets 2 people had said that the black one is better and 1 person said the slot machine on was better. I thought the idea was clearer on the black one but the slot machine one was more fun to look at. I tried to improve them both from what was said which was:
On the black one - make the background lighter
- change the font
On the slot machine one - Change the layout
- Make it more of a cycle to show my intended message that slot machines are addictive and they dont pay off
- Add a caption
These are the improved ones. I am entering the MACHINE one because I think its simpler clearer and has more impact than the slot machine one.
